changes i have made according to audience feedback

front cover-

i have made the cover lines clear and easy the read, i have done this my moving them around so they
we not all munched together, i have also changed the font in the middle for the bands name because it was suggested that it looked odd, but i think the font i have picked now is more appropriate.

contents page-

i have moved everything around, i have put a page number on the photo so it doesn't look like a random photo also i have put the 'hello readers' part at the top so that i connects to the reader as soon as they look at the contents page in the magazine i have also change the font sizes on my articles.

double page spread-

there was nothing suggested to me that i needed to change