Sophie Lane I like the personal "hello readers" section but I don't think the font is very clear and shouldn't be on top of the image. It looks a bit clustered
Emma Barnett Yeah, I love the hello readers thing, it instantly connects with the reader :D but you might want to rearrange the layout a bit, like put the hello readers box at the very top and then put alice's face underneath, then 'hello readers' box would look more effective and connect with the reader's gaze quickly. But tbf, the large image of Alice's face looks kinda random as there is no info about her or any tag lines.
Arno Bryant Like the 'Hello Readers' , Maybe crop out /*use clever computer magic out* the picture of the computer so it doesn't look to 'School-y' :) Need to rearrange the layout to get rid of hyphen and line up the 'extra' and 'Profiles' boxes.Maybe play with the fonts sizes , Larger headings and smaller contents? Love the heading/photo! :')
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