front cover audience response via facebook

hannah barnett's respoce to the front cover, contents page and double page spread-
"Front cover-You may want to move the cover lines in slightly
Contents page-Reposition image so it doesn't overlap the side text
Double page-Check the spelling and grammar
Everything else is great :)"

front cover  facebook response

Sophie Lane this is really good but I think some of the cover lines could be made more clear

Emma Barnett I really like it and especially the title font and the colour scheme, but perhaps space out the little sub headings a little clearly, so they're not so bunched up at the bottom :)

Sophie Jet Kanzler The font you've used looks really good the layout looks pretty realistic, maybe edit the image in photoshop/colours/contrasts/balance so the colours look exaggerated, retro or something? :D And I think 'Chronicles' is spelt wrong >_>

Beth Oliver This is brilliant!! :D

Arno Bryant This is honestly really good! :) Just ; Get rid of the white line at the left o.O , Maybe change the 'yellow snow' look thing on the main title text , just looks abit odd. Maybe move the 'first adition sticker' doesn't look quite right? . And need to change the 'price' block , if you look at real mags it'll just have the "£4" in the bar-code box. (Maybe add some other prices in other currencies just to add to the overall allusion of professionally ? ) :')

Alice Roe This is great sophie, my only criticsm for this would be is how theres alot of space on the right hand side of the front cover which isn't being used.. i'd suggest making the content information slightly bigger aswell